Monday, June 30, 2008

Day 1: Genesis

Part I
Survival


Day One
Genesis

The Skywalkers' Sunset

The fire had died down, so Anakin lit their own small campfire with his lightsaber. They had crashed around midday here, and now the sun hung low in the west.

Padmé was leaning against a tree, wrapped up in blankets like a mummy. Anakin was struggling with the tent, which kept trying to fold in on itself. Watching him, Padmé wanted to giggle but knew it would only harm her. She could still smile, though.

Anakin turned to her and glared. “You think this is funny?” he demanded, exasperated. The tent caved again.

Padmé couldn’t stop the giggle this time, much as it hurt. Smiling despite the pain, she gasped out, “Most powerful Jedi ever, and he can’t even set up a little tent.”

“And you could?”

Padmé managed a tiny shrug. “I would if I could, but I can’t.”

Rolling his eyes, Anakin returned to his task. “Obi-Wan always -grunt- always helped -grunt- me before.”

“Uh-huh.”

The tent fell back out of Anakin’s grip. He dove for it and lost his balance. Padmé bit back another giggle. Anakin pulled himself up, careful of his broken collarbone. Then he let out a frustrated snarl and kicked at the fabric. “Stupid thing!” he growled. He turned to his wife and said, “A little help?”

Padmé raised her eyebrows and looked pointedly down at her cocooned self.

“But do you know how to set this up?” Anakin persisted.

“Sure. I would watch Dad do it when he took us camping.”

“You knew all along and didn’t tell me?”

“I thought that you’d have had it figured out by now!”

“You thought I’d...thanks a lot, Padmé!”

Once Padmé started directing Anakin, the tent was raised quickly. The Jedi Padawan then set to making dinner.

“Well,” Padmé said with a straight face, “If you can’t set up tents, at least you can cook.”

Anakin threw her an extraordinarily rare long-suffering look. “Open up, Ladyship.”

Padmé obediently opened her mouth for Anakin to feed her another chunk of meat. “Seriously, this is-”

“No talking with your mouth full,” Anakin admonished playfully. “Come on, you’ve been to etiquette school.”

Padmé threw him a mock-icy glare and swallowed. “Don’t rebuke me when I’m complimenting you.”

A lopsided grin spreading across his face, Anakin settled easily back on his haunches. “Oh, well then in that case.”

Padmé rolled her eyes. “Just going to say how tasty the meat was,” she muttered.

Anakin’s grin grew even wider. “‘Not much spice – just enough’.”

“You sounded like you were quoting,” Padmé noted.

“An admirable observation. Dex Jettster says that. He taught me how to cook, since Obi-wan, umm...” He waved his left hand expressively.

Padmé grinned with understanding and thought that if her husband’s grin got any wider, his face would split.

~*~

Anakin snuggled in the sleeping bag next to Padmé. She was slightly Force-sensitive, but she didn’t need the Force to figure out that her husband was dead-tired. Still, she had to tell him – she didn’t want to postpone it any longer. “Ani?”

“Mmm?” came the sleepy reply.

“Ani, there’s something I need to tell you.”

Anakin opened his eyes. “What, honey?”

She closed her eyes and took a deep breath, then started into those impossibly blue eyes. “I’m...Ani, I’m pregnant.”

Anakin’s face was radiant. “Pregnant? You’re going to have a baby?”

Padmé smiled. “That’s generally what being pregnant means,” she teased. “And he’s your baby, too.”

Anakin’s smile was beatific. I’m gonna be a father – Force, I am a father! “Wait a minute – he? How do you know it’s a boy?”

Padmé grinned. “I don’t… for sure. But I hope.”

“How long have you been pregnant?”

Padmé stared at Anakin. “You know what today’s date is, and you know what day we were married. You do the math.”

“Two months? You’ve been pregnant for two months, and you didn’t tell me?”

“I didn’t know for sure until a month ago. Then, I wanted to wait for the trip home from the negotiations to tell you so that we could celebrate after work.”

“Oh.” Good one, Skywalker, Anakin thought. That sounded inane.

“Mm. I’m due early next spring.”

“Around my birthday?” Anakin asked hopefully.

“March, not April.”

Anakin grinned. “Okay, early birthday present.”

Padmé grinned back. “Maybe by then, Dan and Gil will have made some progress with the Jedi Council on the marriage issue.”

Anakin snorted and rolled his eyes. “Right, and the war will be over, too. Don’t think it’ll happen that quick, Pad.”

Padmé shrugged slightly. “We’ll cross that bridge when we come to it,” she said, quoting something Anakin had said before their marriage.

Anakin nodded. “Just for tonight, there’s no war or Jedi. Just you, me, and our baby.”

“Our baby boy,” Padmé corrected, grinning.

“Our baby boy,” Anakin grinned back.

Wednesday, June 11, 2008

Part 1 of an Interview

I recently had the chance to interview Lúthien Skywalker from Across the Stars, and this is the first part of that interview.
(Author's note: this whole interview is a little bit tongue-in-cheek.)


Sister and Brother: Lúthien and Luke Skywalker

Gwen: Hello, Lúthien. Welcome to my blog.

Lúthien: Hi, Gwen. Thanks for having me.

Gwen: Now, I know that you can’t tell our readers that much for fear of giving them too many spoilers, but I’m still going to ask you stuff that they’ll probably want to know.

Lúthien: Right. That’s okay. It’s your job to ask and my job to decide how to answer.

Gwen: (grins) Ho-kay. So, why did you start writing Across the Stars in the first place?

Lúthien: (laughs) Well, it all came about because of something one of my cousins said when we were kids. He joked that I had such a happening life that I ought to write about it. And I thought, “Oh man, that’s a great idea!” (laughter) So that’s how it all got started.

Gwen: And you’re letting me publish your books online for the first time on Earth. Why?

Lúthien: I wanted Earthlings to know our story.

Gwen: By “our story,” you mean your family’s.

Lúthien: Right. There’s so much in that story, and I wanted to share it.

Gwen: You’re the main author of the books, but not the only one, right?

Lúthien: Right. The other authors will remain anonymous for now.

Gwen: Okay, you’ve given me a lot of previews, and I’ve seen you write the thoughts and feelings of villains. How do you do that?

Lúthien: It’s usually guesswork, but I think it’s probably fairly accurate guesswork. If I know a particular person – what he does, how he does it, what his sense in the Force feels like – I can postdict how he thinks and feels.

Gwen: Postdict?

Lúthien: Yeah, my own made-up word. Postdict is predict in reverse.

Gwen: Star Wars exists already on Earth, but your version is very different. Why?

Lúthien: That’s a result of selling the Earth copyrights to the story. It’s kind of like those old Disney movies that are based off pre-existing books but the films themselves are really different.

Gwen: So your story is like those pre-existing books?

Lúthien: Yeah.

Gwen: What do you think about what they did to the story?

Lúthien: (shrugs) Some things I like, and some things I don’t. I got cut out of the story, and so did a lot of other people. Some people die that weren’t supposed to –

Gwen: Like Obi-Wan and Siri.

Lúthien: Right, like Obi-Wan and Siri… Why’d Siri have to get killed by Magus? She survived that little encounter – I mean, come on: she’s a great Jedi!

Gwen: Yeah, I never liked it that Siri’s killed.

Lúthien: Uh-huh. And some of the things that I did were – oops! I almost gave away spoilers! (laughs)

Gwen: Oh, we can’t have that!

Lúthien: Yeah! Don’t worry, people: you’ll find out someday!

Gwen: Now in the preview vid I posted on YouTube, I used Liv Tyler as a template for you. Because – man! – you really do look like her!

Lúthien: (smiling) I know, everybody says that! Yeah, our facial features are very similar. The differences lie in coloring – our eyes are pretty much the same shade, but that’s where it ends. My skin isn’t white – it’s like my dad’s. My hair was dark when I was little, but as I got older, it lightened a lot. It’s auburn, but it’s almost red.

Gwen: One time, you dyed it, right?

Lúthien: (laughs) Yeah. I cut it to shoulder-length and dyed it dark blond. I looked like the female version of my dad. The looks I got were priceless!

Gwen: Mind if I describe your voice to our readers?

Lúthien: Not at all – go ‘head!

Gwen: Well, sometimes your voice sounds husky like Anakin’s, and other times it sounds girlish like Padmé’s. And your accent sounds Midwestern American.

Lúthien: In my Galaxy, that accent’s called Corellian. Actually, since I spent the first three years of my life on Coruscant, my native accent is Coruscanti. But it shifted to Corellian, and now, I can just slip in and out of the two.

Gwen: Coruscanti on Earth is…

Lúthien: British.

Gwen: (nods) Okay. Now, in the stories, you usually refer to yourself as Lúthien, and that’s what everyone calls you. But Lúthien isn’t quite your full first name.

Lúthien: (shifts in her chair) Yeah, actually, my name is Lúthiené, with that special little Naboo “ay” sound at the end. But everyone still calls me Lúthien.

Gwen: You were named after Lúthien Tinúviel from The Silmarillion?

Lúthien: Yeah, my mom was a big Tolkien fan, and she loved the name “Lúthien.” It was my dad’s idea to add the extra “e”. I love being named after her, because for one, it’s such a pretty name. And two, she’s such a heroine. I mean, we’re talking about the only person to ever hold a sword to Sauron’s throat! She’s incredibly beautiful, amazingly brave, and undyingly loyal. That’s my kind of girl!


Next up!
Part 2 of the interview - Lúthien never really grew up.

Saturday, June 7, 2008

Notice on Updates

Just to let you let you know, I am a prolific writer. And summer is the busiest time of year for me. So, I can't update this new book as often as I'd like. But I do hope to update every two weeks at longest. If you have already read the prologue and wonder what will happen next to the Skywalkers - seeing as how I've stranded a pregnant Padmé on an uninhabited world - please just be patient and hang in there. I want get this story published probably more than anyone will ever want to read it.

Thursday, June 5, 2008

Teaser Summary

The Rising Sun


A secret, a separation, a crash, a tragedy... can Anakin's and Padmé's recent marriage survive? So soon after their marriage, a terrible tragedy pushes their relationship to the breaking point.

There is hope for the family in the future, if only they can survive this...


Time: 23-2 BBY, starts 2 months after Episode II

Genre: Part One is Action, Angst, Romance; Part Two is Romance, Family, Comedy

Rating: Part One is PG for tragedy

Wednesday, June 4, 2008

The Rising Sun - Prologue

The Rising Sun

Dramatis Personae


Anakin Skywalker
A 19-yr.-old Jedi Padawan with the largest midi-chlorian count on record, the most gifted Force-sensitive in history as a result. He's a hotshot at the helm of anything that flies, and a mechanic who can fix anything, including his own mechno right arm. He is secretly, illegally married to Senator Amidala.

Padmé Amidala Skywalker
A 24-yr.-old Senator, representing her native planet Naboo as well as the Chromell Sector after serving 2 terms as the Queen of Naboo. She's a gifted speaker, and a passionate philanthropist. She is the secret wife of Anakin Skywalker.

Obi-Wan Kenobi
A 35-yr.-old Jedi Knight, mentor of Anakin Skywalker. He's a great pilot who hates to fly, and an excellent diplomat who prefers to stay out of others' troubles, as he has enough of his own with his unruly Padawan. Once as unruly himself as Anakin, he is now one of the most orthodox Jedi alive.

Ruwee Naberrie
A retired professor from Theed University, father of Senator Amidala. Anakin still had to ask Ruwee for permission to marry Padmé, permission that Ruwee readily granted, despite the secrecy of the arrangment.

Jobal Naberrie
Ruwee's wife, Padmé's mother. She's spent the past ten years of her life worrying over the safety of her younger daughter, and is grateful that Padmé now has someone to take care of her.

Sola Naberrie
Older sister of Padmé, married to Darred Janren, and mother of 2 boys and 2 girls. Both her boys are "hopefuls" in the Jedi Temple, and her elder daughter Ryoo is an adoption. Sola is excited about her "baby sister's" marriage, and she had even tried to play matchmaker before the wedding.

Dormé
Padmé's right-hand handmaiden and decoy. Dormé is very devoted to her Lady, and is dedicated to helping protect the Skywalker secret.


Siri Tachi
A 33-yr.-old Jedi Knight, and special friend of Obi-Wan Kenobi. Siri is a very unorthodox Jedi, and consequently a good friend of Anakin's, as well. She was trained by former Council member Adi Gallia.

Lúthien Skywalker
The firstborn child of Anakin and Padmé Skywalker. A little baby, probably with a vast potential.




Prologue

The Crash


“Hold on tight, Padmé!”

Padmé nodded wordlessly, gritted her teeth, and clutched at the armrests of her seat until her knuckles were white. She forced her eyes to stay open though reflex told her to squeeze them shut.

Sweat broke out on Anakin’s face. His hands clenched the steering yoke of the shuttle so tightly that the servos in his mechno arm protested. His grip on the Force was heightened by his fear, and he called upon the Force to hold the ship relatively steady as it veered down to the planet’s surface in crash collision.

The atmosphere buffeted them hard. Thank God that the inertial compensator, unlike most of the ship’s systems, hadn’t failed. If it had, he and Padmé would have been crushed by now.

Padmé. So recently his wife. He was her guardian – he had to protect her. To save her from any and every danger.

His grip on the Force slipped and the shuttle careened. He desperately tried to grab hold of it again, but it was too late. The mountains filled the viewport.

“Anakin!” Padmé cried. Her hand flew instinctively to her still-flat abdomen.

Hold on!” he repeated.

As Padmé seized the armrests again, her eyes squeezed shut, not in fear now but in desperate prayer. Father in Heaven, keep us safe! Keep us safe! Keep us safe...

“We’re almost there!” Anakin gritted out.

The ground rushed up to meet them violently, and their crash-webbing could not hold them in. Both were hurled forward at the control consoles, and their world went black.

Pain was the first thing he was aware of. His body was full of pain. It seemed that every muscle and bone in his body ached. His mechno arm was strangely numb. Something warm and wet plastered his forehead, where a sharp pain throbbed.

He opened his eyes and groaned. The protective shell of his right arm was gone, shattered by the crash’s impact.

The next thing that he saw was that he was gracelessly spread out over the console. Then he tilted his head just enough to see Padmé – she was spread out over the console, too. Only, she was still unconscious.

“Padmé?” he tried. His voice was shaky. He pushed himself up, grimacing as he realized that not only did his bones ache, but also his left collarbone was fractured. Oh, this is good.

“Padmé.” Still no answer. She was out.

The cockpit was a mess – it looked literally as though a tornado had run through it. Damaged equipment lay between him and Padmé, who was only about four feet away. Slowly, carefully, he pulled himself onto and over the twisted pile, his collarbone protesting cruelly. He eased over to her side and…

Blast! If I lift her, my shoulder is going to go. He clenched his damaged right hand into a durasteel fist. Okay, okay, just use the Force.

He reached out for the Force and directed it towards his wife. Her body slowly rose off the console, and backward into his right arm. She sagged into him, her head lolling up to face him. Blood snaked out of the right corner of her open mouth. Her whole left cheek was one blackish-purple bruise. Anakin winced. This was probably nothing compared to the time that that nexu had ripped her back open in the Geonosian arena, but… Wounded was wounded

“Padmé,” he said again. He kissed her. “Padmé,” he said louder, “it’s time to wake up.”

Her body shuddered before her eyes fluttered open. “Ani,” she whispered in a shaky breath. She frowned and feebly reached up to his face. “Your forehead. It’s covered with blood.”

“Just a cut,” he assured her. Blood… I should have known it was blood.

“My chest… hurts. Ribs… I think a couple are broken.” She coughed, and cried out in pain. Oh yeah, they’re broken, all right. Sudden fear lanced through her heart. Oh no! The baby!

Anakin instantly sensed it. “What’s wrong?” he demanded.

Padmé tried to damp down her fear. He’ll be okay, he’ll be okay, he’ll be okay… “It’s nothing. I’m just – worried.”

Anakin frowned, clearly not reassured, but he let it go as he looked up and around. “I’ve gotta get you outta here. This thing is gonna blow soon. I’ll get you out, then I’ll get out the emergency packs.”

“Make sure you get my travel case,” Padmé urged.

Travel case? “Padmé, the emergency packs are a little more important than your wardrobe.”

“Anakin!” Her voice was sharp – she’d never spoken to him like that before. He wasn’t even sure that he’d ever even heard her use that tone. Just as his temper was about to rise, he realized something. Her sense in the Force radiated fear. “Please,” she pleaded softly, “just trust me. Do as I say.”

Anakin nodded, confused inside. He supposed that he’d just never understand women, just like Gilraen Starrider had said. “Can you stand?”

“I think if you’re helping me…”

With the help of the Force on Anakin’s part and prayer on Padmé’s, the young couple managed to make it about a hundred meters from the shuttle. Padmé rested on a fallen tree while Anakin quickly retrieved her travel case and the emergency packs. He had to make two trips, and as he left the hatch the second time, he felt a surge of warning in the Force. He broke into a dead run, and made it about halfway to Padmé before the shuttle exploded. The force of the blast blew him down to the ground.

“Anakin!” Padmé’s scream was lost in the roar of the fire.

She felt a sudden reassurance in the Force. I’m okay. I’ll come when it’s safe for me to get up.

Padmé nodded to her husband’s telepathy, and then remembered that he couldn’t see the gesture. Be careful.

She felt a telepathic boyish grin, and had to smile in reply. Aren’t I always?

As long as Anakin was safe, Padmé had to get in the playful last word. No comment.

The whole galaxy could be exploding around them, just so long as Anakin was still okay. That was all that mattered. Well, that, and then the other…

Introducing Across the Stars



(Following description from the YouTube page.)

This video is a preview for my Alternate Universe, with my using Liv Tyler as a template for Lúthien Skywalker. The pictures with titles are cover arts for the various books.

For the past 2 years, I've had these story ideas brewing in my head, and I've been trying to get them out as something readable for almost as long. Across the Stars is a complete Alternate Universe of Star Wars, a planned outline of several series and standalones in a long timeline.
It contains many changes to the real story, such as leaving certain characters like Obi-Wan Kenobi and Siri Tachi alive. Other changes are very noticeable in the form of Original Characters, the most prominent being the catalyst that sets up the majority of the story. The largest premise of this Alternate Universe is this character: what if Anakin and Padmé had had a firstborn BEFORE Luke and Leia? This firstborn is a daughter, Lúthien Skywalker. (And in case you're wondering, in no way is she a Mary Sue -- far from it, in fact!)


Another premise of my Alternate Universe is that the Star Wars Galaxy is culturally connected to our own planet. The humans in Star Wars are descended from our world. Diverse things from our world are transmitted to Star Wars -- like Celtic music, Spanish as a major language, American idioms, pizza, denim, and different movies, books, etc.

And if your reaction is negative, please be mature in posting your criticism. I don't need rudeness, and I know that there are a lot of Star Wars fans that will be averse to my ideas. Please, no swearing or acronym swearing, and no other foul language, as such comments will be edited or deleted.


CREDITS:
Images derived from the image galleries of Wikipedia, Wookieepedia, and Council of Elrond.
Music from Star Wars Episode II: Attack of the Clones.

~*Rings, Lightsabers & Wardrobes*~